ailedd
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Post by ailedd on May 13, 2010 21:04:41 GMT -5
Name: Sara Age: 17 Gender: Female Sexual Orientation: Strait Appearance: Sara is an average built girl at about 5'6. She has light brown hair that lays at her shoulders and bangs that halfway cover her eyes. she has hazel/green eyes (with hazel towards the middle). She has fair skin. she is Very friendly and shy towards anyone she does not know well, but completely random when you get to know her. Picture: (will come later) History: Sara is from earth and has been through 5 hatchings , but having failed to impress a dragon as of yet she was sent to the Rocky Weyr to assist the injured and disabled, she has only just recently arrived to the weyr so she is busy teaching Gragonith what he cant take, and trying not to get lost around the weyr. Firelizard Name: Orros ~ he is one of the more serious Firelizards, well as serious as can be, who has to keep a close eye on Sara. he is known to steal shiny things for the sake of making her happy, including but not limited to: keys, change, silverware, random bits of shiny metal, and anything else that shouldn't be moved. Firelizard Color: BlueWanted Dragon Name: SkealathWanted Dragon Color: BlueName: Skelkineyth (Impressed April 2011) Color: Green (9AD44D) Personality: Whiner, Vain, Clean Size: 23ft Hatching: rockyweyr.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=hatchings&action=display&thread=701
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Post by Topaz on May 13, 2010 21:57:12 GMT -5
Well first, they don't let the mentally unstable stand at Hatchings. I'm pretty sure they would realize that she had become depressed beforehand. So before I continue with the crit, I'll need you to change that. ^-^
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Post by ailedd on May 13, 2010 22:15:12 GMT -5
ehh yea i need to re read up on the books its been quite a while.. i think 6 years? yea.something like that.
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Post by Topaz on May 13, 2010 22:35:50 GMT -5
No worries. If you need some suggestions, or you have questions about what may or may not be allowed, feel free to mail me. :3
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Post by ailedd on May 15, 2010 23:45:19 GMT -5
this is as good as its going to get tonight....
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Post by Topaz on May 16, 2010 0:42:55 GMT -5
Okay. Now, two things. You're flit cannot be bronze because we've reached the max, and it's name cannot be a dragon's name, meaning it can't end in 'th'. It's forbidden on Pern, considered a direct insult to the dragons, and so it is still forbidden in Rocky.
Other than that, you're good. ^-^
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Post by ailedd on May 16, 2010 0:44:05 GMT -5
well i was working on that when you said that so yea. i want a bronz tho but i cant play a guy oh well ill get over it.
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Post by FaizahPandora on May 16, 2010 0:52:56 GMT -5
It's still possible for you to Impress a bronze flitter later.
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Post by ailedd on May 16, 2010 0:57:46 GMT -5
yea true but im fine with just one. i just want to write the first post idea i have for her.
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Post by Topaz on May 16, 2010 1:14:48 GMT -5
well i was working on that when you said that so yea. i want a bronz tho but i cant play a guy oh well ill get over it. Bronzes and blues are both male though.. There's not much difference between them as long as you give them the same personality.
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Post by FaizahPandora on Jan 30, 2012 9:50:03 GMT -5
Impression date for Skelkineyth
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